写英文求职信的细节问题-3

　　C：陈腐的句子： Hoping you will give me an interview, I am……（我希望与您面谈） Anticipating a favorable decision, I wait your……（等候您的佳音） Trusting your reply will be satisfactory, I remain(静候满意的答复)

　　D：哀求式的句子，不够完整（漏掉面谈时间）： Won't you please give me the chance to interview your? I can be reached by calling Beijing 12345678.请给我一个面试机会，联系电话12345678.

　　改写后： May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? My telephone is Beijing 12345678. You can reach me between nine and five o'clock during the day. 能不能与您面谈以便进一步商讨？我的电话是12345678。我从上午九点到下午五点都比较方便。

　　E：太过自信的句子： I am quite certain that an interview will substantiate my statements Between two and four every afternoon except Tuesday you can reach me by telephoning 12345678. 我深信面谈可以证实我的话。您可在每天下午二至四点（星期二例外）打电话12345678通知我。

　　F：较具体有效的句子。 May I have an interview? My residence telephone is (010) 12345678. You reach me by calling that number until June 30. After July 2, my address will be XXXX, XXXX Street, XXXX District. 能否给我一个面试机会？我的住宅电话为12345678。六月三十日以前我都在此处，七月二日以后，我的新址为***************。

　　求职信的语气

　　求职信要发挥最大的效果，语气必须肯定、自信、有创意而不过分夸张，如能事先了解雇主的喜好，或其他人格特点，根据物以类聚的原理，求职信如果能迎合雇主的特点，求职的人一定可以比其他人占上风，获得面谈的机会。